We handed in our 2nd draft to gain feedback to help improve on our film opening scene to make it the best it can be for our final cut.
Overall feedback was positive showing that or work had improved a great amount since the last draft but there are still however some improvement that can be made. Adding some extreme close ups for dramatic effect was something that was mentioned the most, we now plan to have one of Matts eyes to show his fear and one of his hands shaking to how nervous he is when taking off his jumper. Titles such as the director, writer, actors etc are needed to be added throughout most likely during the running sequence. The main title needs to fade in also. Finally we have been told we should later sounds by adding heavy breathing and other foley noises.
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