Improvements

Improvements

We handed in our first draft (Without credits, all shots and our own production logo) and gained feedback from our teacher and class mates. We all decided that there were many improvements to be made. The first improvement needed to be made is cutting down on the length of the production company logo's as 3 was too many and it made it too long with nearly 30 seconds of logo's. We then need to shoot some shots of the body in the forest again as we agreed the murder weapon with blood at the end needed to be more prominent and clearer. We need to add a shot of Billy washing his hands again as it was agreed the shot of the tap without Billy was pointless and unnecessary. We also agreed that the zooming out of the body was for too long. Some of the running away shots also need to be cut and shortened, the music for this section will also be changed as it is too dramatic as does not fit it with the theme of our film. Finally we decided that we just need more shots to explain more showing that it was Matt and Billy who killed the boy in the forest.